The following blog post was created for my Writing Research and Technology class. After working on a project called a Twitterive for a few weeks we had the opportunity to discuss our progress with our peers, get feedback and make revision plans. This is a brief summary of the revisions I plan to make.
After getting feedback on my Twitterive there are some things that I am sure that it needs. I was aware that it lacked cohesiveness and a reptend before the workshop and my classmates have helped me to develop some of my ideas. I would like to make the map concept that I have been working on my reptend. I am still playing around with exactly what this concept will result in, but I am getting closer to settling on one idea. At this point I am trying to decide between coordinates or step by step directions that culminate in some sort of map.
I would also like to add a story, fictional or real, to add cohesiveness to the entire Twitterive. I am also struggling with the execution of this idea, but I started writing a couple stories so that I can at least figure out what type would be best. I will also add a few of the six word stories we began creating in class, although I am not sure where I will add them in.
Although this may not seem like a lot, these are major elements that were missing from my Twitterive and having more of a specific direction to go in has renewed my confidence that I will turn out a great final product. I would like to thank my classmates for their help and I look forward to their continued feedback next week. Some questions I would like answered are:
Does my "place" make sense to others?
Is my Twitterive cohesive enough?
Is there anything that takes away from the Twitterive that I should take out?
Is my Twitterive boring?
Is there any way to make the formatting less uniform?
After getting feedback on my Twitterive there are some things that I am sure that it needs. I was aware that it lacked cohesiveness and a reptend before the workshop and my classmates have helped me to develop some of my ideas. I would like to make the map concept that I have been working on my reptend. I am still playing around with exactly what this concept will result in, but I am getting closer to settling on one idea. At this point I am trying to decide between coordinates or step by step directions that culminate in some sort of map.
I would also like to add a story, fictional or real, to add cohesiveness to the entire Twitterive. I am also struggling with the execution of this idea, but I started writing a couple stories so that I can at least figure out what type would be best. I will also add a few of the six word stories we began creating in class, although I am not sure where I will add them in.
Although this may not seem like a lot, these are major elements that were missing from my Twitterive and having more of a specific direction to go in has renewed my confidence that I will turn out a great final product. I would like to thank my classmates for their help and I look forward to their continued feedback next week. Some questions I would like answered are:
Does my "place" make sense to others?
Is my Twitterive cohesive enough?
Is there anything that takes away from the Twitterive that I should take out?
Is my Twitterive boring?
Is there any way to make the formatting less uniform?
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